the beat at the beginning reminds me of phace's drum style. I'd see a bit more of overdrived & equalized elements and it would be more evil! Other than that it's a solid track. Good job man, sounds like you're getting better! :)
feel free to hit me up for tips, i generally do music when i'm on my spare time. I may help you raising the bar to the neuroshpere standard... depends on you! :p